I bit too congested for me. The cropping is tight and there's that disturbing rail running through the beak, as well as the vegetation through the bird's head. Sorry for being so tough. Hey, my rating went down at VFXY, so that's an indication I might be doing something wrong. Just keep shooting: practice, practice, practice.
27 May 2008 11:52pm
@Luis A. De Jesus R.: Hey - Ha! Love your critique! I posted this image, see no comment and wonder.... clearly no one likes it but WHY! Thank you for taking it apart! As I mentioned previously it`s been only a few months since my involvement with any aspect of photography, including learning to see. I can`t see my own photos yet. I look at them as a part of that time and moment when it was taken as apposed to seeing only the image in front of me. Something to work on! Thank you and keep it coming!